Growing up I will be a master I will lead my city I will save my people from bad. Maturing older I have watched my dad with every step he took, he fought evil saving innocent people and also collecting different eyes to gain more power. My dad is as strong as a lion taking that leads and rules over a jungle. His sense of humour Mimics the same action a flower does when it opens up to the sun. I train harder and harder every day learning a new life lesson. One night i was out with my mother and sister going out to a restaurant. After we demolished the food we passed a bunch of drunk people causing trouble. One of the guy’s commented on my sister's appearance. I stormed looking at him. We made eye contact , I got angry curling my fist up mum calming me down grabbing onto my T shirt slowly pulling me away. I turned around walking back with mother and sister patting my sisters back cheering her up.
Nice work on your super hero work saving the world wow you will save about trillions of people and be the next Super Man.
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ReplyDeleteI like the descriptive words you have used in your narrative. Your sentences really engage the reader and you have done a fantastic job. I can't wait to see the rest of the work that you have been doing for writing in class! One sentence that I really liked was - His sense of humour mimics the same action a flower does when it opens up to the sun.
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